The Pontianak (Horror)
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This horror story is scripted by me. Read at your own risk. You may scroll away if this is not comfortable for you or your health.
DISCLAIMER : This story contains adult context and horrifications
To those who read all of it, thanks for taking your time on reading this story. If you would like to share your thoughts or feedback, please write them in the comment.
In the year of 1996, a lady name Marlisa moved into the neighbourhood of Cabbagetown, she was a kind 25 year old woman. Everyone in the neighbourhood liked her and welcomed Marlisa to the town
She had a great start of her life. She felt like as if it's a new beginning of a new story
After few months has passed, a man named Alan, one if Marlisa's neighbour, was drunk on a night. His wife and him got divorced not long ago so Alan went to the bar and cheer up
On that same night, Marlisa was heading off after finishing her work. While walking down the streat, she saw Alan fainted on the side road. She hurried to help him out, he was unconcious
Marlisa didn't know what to do, so she brought him back to her house, making him comfortable and decided to take care of him for the night
She carried him into the house, laying him on the couch and went to grab a glass of water and some medicine for Alan. Alan started to wake, he took a glanced at Marlisa who's preparing the medicines
Alan was drunk, he rushed to Marlisa, grabbing her hand, pushing Marlisa to the wall. He sexualized Marlisa, she had no strength to fight back. The next morning Alan was shocked on what he did and quietly ran back home, leaving Marlisa on the bed
Alan hid himself, avoiding Marlisa. She couldn't get in contact with him, she was scared that something could've happen after on
Few days passed, Marlisa couldn't forget about the incident that happened between her and Alan. She went to the hospital to do checkings, infact she got pregnant by Alan
Marlisa teared up, she rushed home and left voice mail in Alan's contact, telling him about the pregnancy. Alan heard the voice mail, he couldn't be responsible for it, he started to lose his mind
Alan's mind was blank, he did not know what to do next, so he confronted a murder. On the night of May, 1996. Alan snuck into Marlisa's house, holding a knife. He made Marlisa unconcious with drugs and stabbed the knife into Marlisa
The murder was silent. No one knows about it happening. The neighbours was suspicious, something might have happened to Marlisa. Her boss called several times, all the calls went on voice box
After such amount of suspicions, they found Marlisa's cold dead body, laying on the bed of her house
Alan could not believe he did something so cruel. He was terrified of everyone
July 1996, the same date when Marlisa was murdered. Alan started to feel anxious, time to time the anxiousness got worse. On that rainy night, a cry was heard in the neighbourhood of Cabbagetown. Dogs around whinning and barking.
A woman was wet from the weather, she knocked on Alan's door ask for shelther. Alan wasn't thinking much, letting the woman in
The door closed, lights started to flicker as she stepped in. The woman stood infront of Alan. Alan asked "Are you okay miss?"
The woman turned her head around her body, with bloods in her eye and pale face she replied "Yes, I am fi----ne"
Alan got terrified, he tries to open the door but it won't open. Alan barge through it, by the time he did that, the woman has her long nails poked into Alan
Blood drips out of Alan, the woman ripped his body off
Bloods are seen everywhere near the front door, the neighbour was aware of Alan's house acting weirdly. They called for the cops
The cops came, they found Alan's dead body with no sign of any murder happens. The cops claimed that he suicided.
You must be confused on why the cops close the case as a suicide. Well, here's the reason why. His organ was no longer in his body but the ripped skin were intact back
Did that woman, or so called as Pontianak furfilled her vengeance? Will she haunt the house?
That will remain untold
[[ THE END ]]
DISCLAIMER : This story contains adult context and horrifications
To those who read all of it, thanks for taking your time on reading this story. If you would like to share your thoughts or feedback, please write them in the comment.
The Pontianak
The Pontianak is a female vampiric ghost in Indonesian and Malay mythology. The pontianak are said to be the spirits of women who died while pregnant. They are said to be able to take on a beautiful human appearance since they prey on men and helpless people. They can also be beasts due to their bloodthirsty and carnivorous nature. Pontianak usually arises at full moon and announces her presence through high-pitched baby cries. If the cry is soft, it means that the pontianak is near, and if it is loud, then she is far. Some believe that if one hears a dog howling at night, it means the pontianak is far, but if a dog is whining, that means the pontianak is nearby.In the year of 1996, a lady name Marlisa moved into the neighbourhood of Cabbagetown, she was a kind 25 year old woman. Everyone in the neighbourhood liked her and welcomed Marlisa to the town
She had a great start of her life. She felt like as if it's a new beginning of a new story
After few months has passed, a man named Alan, one if Marlisa's neighbour, was drunk on a night. His wife and him got divorced not long ago so Alan went to the bar and cheer up
On that same night, Marlisa was heading off after finishing her work. While walking down the streat, she saw Alan fainted on the side road. She hurried to help him out, he was unconcious
Marlisa didn't know what to do, so she brought him back to her house, making him comfortable and decided to take care of him for the night
She carried him into the house, laying him on the couch and went to grab a glass of water and some medicine for Alan. Alan started to wake, he took a glanced at Marlisa who's preparing the medicines
Alan was drunk, he rushed to Marlisa, grabbing her hand, pushing Marlisa to the wall. He sexualized Marlisa, she had no strength to fight back. The next morning Alan was shocked on what he did and quietly ran back home, leaving Marlisa on the bed
Alan hid himself, avoiding Marlisa. She couldn't get in contact with him, she was scared that something could've happen after on
Few days passed, Marlisa couldn't forget about the incident that happened between her and Alan. She went to the hospital to do checkings, infact she got pregnant by Alan
Marlisa teared up, she rushed home and left voice mail in Alan's contact, telling him about the pregnancy. Alan heard the voice mail, he couldn't be responsible for it, he started to lose his mind
Alan's mind was blank, he did not know what to do next, so he confronted a murder. On the night of May, 1996. Alan snuck into Marlisa's house, holding a knife. He made Marlisa unconcious with drugs and stabbed the knife into Marlisa
The murder was silent. No one knows about it happening. The neighbours was suspicious, something might have happened to Marlisa. Her boss called several times, all the calls went on voice box
After such amount of suspicions, they found Marlisa's cold dead body, laying on the bed of her house
Alan could not believe he did something so cruel. He was terrified of everyone
July 1996, the same date when Marlisa was murdered. Alan started to feel anxious, time to time the anxiousness got worse. On that rainy night, a cry was heard in the neighbourhood of Cabbagetown. Dogs around whinning and barking.
A woman was wet from the weather, she knocked on Alan's door ask for shelther. Alan wasn't thinking much, letting the woman in
The door closed, lights started to flicker as she stepped in. The woman stood infront of Alan. Alan asked "Are you okay miss?"
The woman turned her head around her body, with bloods in her eye and pale face she replied "Yes, I am fi----ne"
Alan got terrified, he tries to open the door but it won't open. Alan barge through it, by the time he did that, the woman has her long nails poked into Alan
Blood drips out of Alan, the woman ripped his body off
Bloods are seen everywhere near the front door, the neighbour was aware of Alan's house acting weirdly. They called for the cops
The cops came, they found Alan's dead body with no sign of any murder happens. The cops claimed that he suicided.
You must be confused on why the cops close the case as a suicide. Well, here's the reason why. His organ was no longer in his body but the ripped skin were intact back
Did that woman, or so called as Pontianak furfilled her vengeance? Will she haunt the house?
That will remain untold
[[ THE END ]]
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